I can smell it through a dark brown wrapper. Marked “Hershey’s Chocolate” on the top.
Personally,
I think it should say “HEAVEN IN BAR FORM”
My mind reels. Paradise is one second away. Raising it as quickly, as my thrilled muscles can move, my mouth opens
Ready to receive happiness
And I do!
Sweetness explodes, fireworks of cocoa
Dot the sky of my taste buds
Dusting the whole world
With a layer of sugar
And happiness
Melting
Sweet as honey, smooth as oil
To settle in my stomach, making me want more
If chocolate was a feeling, I would call it:
Love.
Wow…this writing is incredible! And chocolate is one of my most favorite things to eat! I love the line “HEAVEN IN BAR FORM!”
-Mrs. Sokolowski, teacher in NY
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